1.Unexpected Visitor(420)

Ninth grade rewrite

Unexpected Visitor

【1】Ausable wasn't the typical secret agent Fowler had imagined. As they walked down the dark hallway of the French hotel, Fowler couldn't help but feel disappointed. Ausable's room, located on the sixth floor, was far from the glamorous setting Fowler had envisioned.

【2】Firstly, Ausable was overweight. Secondly, his accent still retained traces of New England, despite his two decades in Paris.

【3】"You seem let down," Ausable wheezed. "You expected espionage and danger, didn't you? You thought meeting a secret agent would be thrilling, full of mystery and excitement."

【4】"Instead," Ausable continued, "you ended up spending the evening in a French music hall with me, a rather unremarkable man."

【5】"You're disillusioned," Ausable said, "but don't worry, you'll soon witness something significant, something that could change history."

【6】As Ausable turned on the light in his room, Fowler's heart raced. Standing in the room, halfway across, was a man holding a small automatic pistol.

【7】"Max, you startled me," Ausable wheezed. "I thought you were in Berlin. What brings you to my room?"

【8】The slender man, Max, explained that he intended to take a report on new missiles from Ausable for safety reasons.

【9】Seating himself heavily, Ausable expressed frustration at the intruder, mentioning it wasn't the first time someone had entered through the balcony.

【10】Max, surprised, hadn't known about the balcony and confessed he used a passkey. Ausable explained the balcony belonged to the adjacent apartment, now vacant.

【11】Max gestured for Fowler to sit as they waited for something for half an hour. Ausable lamented the delay, pondering how Max knew about the report.

【12】Max, with a sinister smile, mentioned retrieving the report tonight. Suddenly, there was a knock at the door.

【13】Ausable smiled, revealing he had called the police for extra protection. Max grew anxious.

【14】As the knocking persisted, Max threatened to shoot if the police weren't sent away. He backed toward the window, eventually escaping to the balcony with a scream.

【15】Just as the door opened, a waiter entered with a tray, delivering a drink Ausable had ordered.

【16】Shaken, Fowler asked about the police. Ausable confessed they were never called; it was just his friend Henry. As for the man on the balcony, Ausable assured Fowler he wouldn't return.

九年级改写

意想不到的访客

【1】奥萨博并不是福勒想象中的那种典型的特工。当他们走在法国酒店黑暗的走廊上时，福勒不禁感到失望。奥萨博的房间位于六楼，与福勒想象中的迷人环境相去甚远。

【2】首先，奥萨博体重超标。其次，尽管他在巴黎生活了二十年，但他的口音仍然保留着新英格兰的痕迹。

【3】“你似乎很失望，”奥萨博喘着气说。“你料到会有间谍活动和危险，是不是?”你以为会见一个秘密特工会很刺激，充满神秘和兴奋。”

【4】“结果，”奥萨博接着说，“你却和我这个平凡的人在一个法国音乐厅里度过了一个晚上。”

【5】“你的幻想破灭了，”奥萨博说，“但别担心，你很快就会看到一些重要的事情，一些可能改变历史的事情。”

【6】当奥萨博打开房间的灯时，福勒的心跳加速。屋子中间站着一个人，手里拿着一把小型自动手枪。

【7】“麦克斯，你吓了我一跳。”奥萨博喘着气说。“我还以为你在柏林呢。什么风把你吹到我房间来了?”

【8】身材瘦削的麦克斯解释说，出于安全考虑，他打算从奥萨博那里拿到一份关于新型导弹的报告。

【9】奥萨博重重地坐了下来，对闯入者表示失望，并提到这不是第一次有人从阳台进入。

【10】麦克斯很吃惊，他不知道阳台的事，于是承认他用了一把钥匙。奥萨博解释说，阳台属于隔壁的公寓，现在是空的。

【11】麦克斯示意福勒坐下，他们等了半个小时。奥萨博为这次耽搁感到惋惜，琢磨着麦克斯是怎么知道这份报告的。

【12】麦克斯带着阴险的微笑提到今晚取回报告。突然，有人敲门。

【13】奥萨博笑了笑，透露他已经打电话给警察寻求额外的保护。麦克斯变得焦虑起来。

【14】敲门声持续不断，麦克斯威胁说，如果不把警察赶走，他就要开枪。他向窗户后退，最后尖叫着逃到阳台上。

【15】就在门打开的时候，一个侍者端着托盘走了进来，送来了奥萨博点的饮料。

【16】福勒很震惊，他询问警察的情况。奥萨博承认从未给他们打过电话;只是他的朋友亨利。至于阳台上的那个人，奥萨博向福勒保证他不会再回来了。