4.Double Cross(331)

Sixth grade rewrite

Double Cross

【1】Janet was a secretary who had worked for her boss for eight years. One day, she had to do something very difficult. She had to take some important things from her office without anyone noticing. These things were very small and could be hidden in her knitting basket.

【2】Janet was nervous because she had to pass through a security gate where a guard would check her things. She had practiced with the guard for a month, talking about her knitting and showing him what she was making. This made the guard trust her, so he didn't check her basket carefully.

【3】On the day she had to do this, she was very scared. She walked to the gate with her knitting basket and showed the guard a small baby bootie she had made. The guard was friendly and let her pass without checking her basket.

【4】After she left the office, she met her husband, Charles, in their car. He was waiting for her to bring the important things. When she gave them to him, he was happy and told her she did a good job.

【5】But after she went home, she found out something terrible. All of Charles's things were gone from their apartment. She realized that Charles had never planned to come back. He had used her for his own plans and then left her behind.

【6】Janet was very sad and cried a lot. She decided that she would call her lawyer the next day to get help. She learned that sometimes people can trick us, and we need to be careful and strong.

【7】This story is about trust and betrayal. It shows how sometimes people we trust can hurt us, and how we have to be brave and face our problems. It's important to be careful and not let others take advantage of us.

六年级改写

双十字

【1】珍妮特是为老板工作了8年的秘书。一天，她不得不做一件非常困难的事情。她不得不在没有人注意的情况下从办公室拿走一些重要的东西。这些东西很小，可以藏在她的编织筐里。

【2】珍妮特很紧张，因为她必须通过一个安全门，那里的保安会检查她的东西。她和警卫一起练习了一个月，一边跟他讲自己的编织，一边给他看自己在做什么。这使警卫信任了她，所以他没有仔细检查她的篮子。

【3】在她不得不这么做的那天，她非常害怕。她提着编织篮子走到门口，给警卫看了一只她做的小婴儿靴。警卫很友好，没有检查她的篮子就让她过去了。

【4】她离开办公室后，在车里遇见了她的丈夫查尔斯。他在等她把重要的东西带来。当她把它们给他时，他很高兴，并告诉她她做得很好。

【5】但回家后，她发现了一件可怕的事情。查尔斯所有的东西都从他们的公寓里不见了。她意识到查尔斯从来没有打算回来。他利用她来达到自己的目的，然后又把她抛弃了。

【6】珍妮特非常伤心，哭了很多次。她决定第二天打电话给她的律师寻求帮助。她明白了有时候人们会欺骗我们，我们需要小心和坚强。

【7】这个故事是关于信任和背叛的。它告诉我们，有时候我们信任的人会伤害我们，我们必须勇敢地面对问题。重要的是要小心，不要让别人利用我们。