5.The Nightingale and the Rose(324)

Ninth grade rewrite

The Nightingale and the Rose

【1】In a garden, a young student was lamenting the absence of red roses, which he believed would win the heart of his beloved. The nightingale, perched in an oak tree, heard his cries and was moved by his sorrow. She decided to help him, despite the risk to her own life.

【2】The nightingale sought out a rose tree that could provide the red rose the student desired. She was told by the first tree that its roses were white, by the second that its roses were yellow, and by the third that its roses were red but had been damaged by winter. The third tree revealed that to create a red rose, the nightingale would have to sing a song of love by moonlight, using her own heart's blood to stain the petals.

【3】The nightingale agreed to this sacrifice, and as the moon rose, she sang with her breast against a thorn. The thorn pierced her heart, and her lifeblood flowed into the tree, creating a magnificent red rose. The rose was so beautiful that even the moon lingered to gaze upon it.

【4】The student, unaware of the nightingale's sacrifice, found the rose and presented it to the girl he loved. However, she was unimpressed, finding the rose unsuitable for her dress and preferring the jewels sent by the Chamberlain's nephew. Disheartened, the student discarded the rose, which was crushed by a passing cart.

【5】The student returned to his studies, convinced that love was impractical and that logic was more valuable. The nightingale's sacrifice, however, remained a testament to the power of love and the lengths to which one might go for it. The story serves as a reminder that love is not always understood or appreciated, and that sometimes the most profound acts of love are those that go unnoticed.

九年级改写

夜莺与玫瑰

【1】在花园里，一个年轻的学生正在哀叹没有红玫瑰，他相信红玫瑰会赢得他心爱的人的心。栖息在橡树上的夜莺听到了他的哭声，被他的悲伤感动了。她决定不顾自己的生命危险帮助他。

【2】夜莺找到了一棵玫瑰树，它能提供学生想要的红玫瑰。第一棵树告诉她，它的玫瑰是白色的;第二棵树告诉她，它的玫瑰是黄色的;第三棵树告诉她，它的玫瑰是红色的，但被冬天损坏了。第三棵树告诉夜莺，要创造一朵红玫瑰，她必须在月光下唱一首情歌，用自己的心血染红花瓣。

【3】夜莺同意了这个牺牲，当月亮升起时，她用她的胸膛顶着刺歌唱。刺穿了她的心脏，她的血液流进了树里，长成了一朵华丽的红玫瑰。这朵玫瑰是如此美丽，连月亮都流连忘返地凝视着它。

【4】学生没有意识到夜莺的牺牲，他找到了玫瑰并把它送给了他所爱的女孩。然而，她并没有被打动，觉得玫瑰不适合她的衣服，她更喜欢宫内大臣的侄子送的珠宝。学生沮丧的扔掉了被过往的马车压碎的玫瑰。

【5】那个学生回到了他的学习中，他确信爱情是不切实际的，逻辑更有价值。然而，夜莺的牺牲仍然证明了爱的力量和一个人可能为之付出的代价。这个故事提醒我们，爱并不总是被理解或欣赏的，有时最深刻的爱的行为是那些不被注意的。