4.Maheegun My Brother(355)

Sixth grade rewrite

Maheegun My Brother

【1】Once upon a time, in a small village, there was a boy named Eric. When Eric was 14, he found a little wolf cub named Maheegun in the forest. It was a cold spring day, and Maheegun was shivering and hungry. Eric took him home and gave him some warm milk. Maheegun grew stronger and became Eric's best friend.

【2】Eric and Maheegun had many adventures together. They played in the meadows, hunted grasshoppers, and even chased field mice in the snow. Eric's grandfather, who was a wise old man, allowed Eric to keep Maheegun as a pet.

【3】However, one night, Eric forgot to chain Maheegun, and the next morning, Maheegun had gone. Mrs. Yesno, a neighbor, was angry because Maheegun had killed her rooster. Eric's grandfather decided to take Maheegun to a place far away.

【4】Eric was very sad to see Maheegun go. He missed his friend and wondered if Maheegun was happy with his new life. But one day, Eric got lost in the forest during a snowstorm. He was cold and tired, and he thought he might not make it home.

【5】Then, something amazing happened. Maheegun, the big black wolf, came to save Eric. He fought off two other wolves that were trying to hurt Eric. Maheegun stayed with Eric all night, keeping him warm and safe.

【6】The next day, Eric's grandfather and a search party found Eric and Maheegun. Eric's grandfather was about to shoot Maheegun, but Eric stopped him. He told his grandfather that it was Maheegun who had saved him.

【7】Eric was taken home and cared for by his family. He was very weak, but the doctor said he would be okay. Eric was happy to know that Maheegun was safe with his own kind.

【8】This story teaches us that even though we may lose our friends, they can still be there for us when we need them the most. It also shows us the importance of friendship and loyalty.

六年级改写

美尔根，我的兄弟

【1】从前，在一个小村庄里，有一个名叫埃里克的男孩。埃里克14岁时，在森林里发现了一只名叫美尔根的小狼崽。这是一个寒冷的春日，美尔根饿得瑟瑟发抖。埃里克把他带回家，给了他一些热牛奶。美尔根越来越强壮，成为埃里克最好的朋友。

【2】埃里克和美尔根一起经历了许多冒险。他们在草地上玩耍，捕捉蚱蜢，甚至在雪地里追逐田鼠。埃里克的祖父是一位聪明的老人，他允许埃里克把美尔根当作宠物养。

【3】然而，一天晚上，埃里克忘了给美尔根戴上锁链，第二天早上，美尔根就走了。邻居耶斯诺太太很生气，因为美尔根杀了她的公鸡。埃里克的祖父决定带美尔根去一个很远的地方。

【4】看到美尔根走了，埃里克很伤心。他想念他的朋友，不知道美尔根对他的新生活是否满意。但是有一天，埃里克在一场暴风雪中在森林里迷路了。他又冷又累，他想他可能回不了家了。

【5】然后，神奇的事情发生了。大黑狼美尔根来救埃里克。他击退了另外两只想伤害埃里克的狼。美尔根整夜陪着埃里克，保证他的温暖和安全。

【6】第二天，埃里克的祖父和一个搜救队找到了埃里克和梅厄根。埃里克的祖父正要向美尔根开枪，但埃里克阻止了他。他告诉他的祖父是美尔根救了他。

【7】埃里克被带回家，由他的家人照顾。他很虚弱，但医生说他会没事的。埃里克很高兴知道美尔根和他的同类在一起很安全。

【8】这个故事告诉我们，即使我们可能会失去朋友，但在我们最需要他们的时候，他们仍然会在我们身边。它也向我们展示了友谊和忠诚的重要性。