4.Maheegun My Brother(318)

Ninth grade rewrite

Maheegun My Brother

【1】In a remote village, a young boy named Eric discovered a wolf cub named Maheegun during a late spring. Eric and his grandfather were fishing when they heard a faint cry and found the shivering cub. Eric, moved by the cub's weakness, took him in and nursed him back to health with warm milk. His grandfather eventually agreed to let Eric keep Maheegun.

【2】Eric's 14th year was filled with joy, despite the occasional mischief from Maheegun, who was curious and playful. They hunted together, played in the meadows, and Maheegun grew into a handsome wolf with a black coat. The winter months were especially happy as they shared stories by the fire.

【3】However, Maheegun's wild nature led to a conflict with a neighbor, Mrs. Yesno, whose rooster was killed. Eric's grandfather decided to take Maheegun to a distant place. On their journey, Maheegun showed signs of restlessness, and Eric realized that Maheegun was destined to be with his own kind.

【4】One winter, Eric got lost in a snowstorm while returning home from a visit. He was exhausted and injured, and his fire was dying. A timber wolf approached, attracted by the scent of blood. Just as Eric thought he was in danger, Maheegun appeared and drove the timber wolf away.

【5】Eric and Maheegun reunited, and Eric's grandfather, who had been searching for him, found them. Eric pleaded with his grandfather not to shoot Maheegun, and the wolf was spared. Eric was taken home and cared for, and he learned that Maheegun was safe with his own pack.

【6】This story highlights the bond between humans and animals, the importance of loyalty, and the natural instincts that guide wildlife. It also teaches us about the consequences of our actions and the value of forgiveness and understanding.

九年级改写

美尔根，我的兄弟

【1】在一个偏远的村庄，一个名叫埃里克的小男孩在晚春时节发现了一只名叫美尔根的小狼崽。埃里克和他的祖父正在钓鱼，突然听到一声微弱的叫声，发现了颤抖的幼崽。埃里克被幼崽的虚弱感动了，他把它带回家，用热牛奶照顾它恢复健康。他的祖父最终同意让埃里克留下美尔根。

【2】埃里克的14岁生活充满了欢乐，尽管偶尔会受到好奇而顽皮的美尔根的恶作剧。他们一起打猎，在草地上玩耍，美尔根长成了一头长着黑色皮毛的英俊的狼。冬天的几个月里，他们在火炉边分享故事，特别快乐。

【3】然而，美尔根的野性导致他和邻居耶诺太太发生了冲突，耶诺太太的公鸡被杀了。埃里克的祖父决定把美尔根带到一个遥远的地方。在旅途中，美尔根表现出不安的迹象，埃里克意识到美尔根注定要和他的同类在一起。

【4】有一年冬天，埃里克在回家的路上遇到暴风雪，迷了路。他疲惫不堪，又受了伤，心中的火焰也快要熄灭了。一只森林狼被血的气味吸引过来了。就在埃里克以为自己有危险的时候，美尔根出现了，把狼赶走了。

【5】埃里克和美尔根团聚了，一直在寻找他的祖父找到了他们。埃里克恳求他的祖父不要射杀美尔根，这只狼幸免于难。埃里克被带回家照顾，他得知美尔根和他自己的狼群在一起很安全。

【6】这个故事突出了人与动物之间的联系，忠诚的重要性，以及引导野生动物的自然本能。它还教会我们行为的后果，以及宽恕和理解的价值。