2.Say Yes(290)

Sixth grade rewrite

Say Yes

【1】Once upon a time, there was a man who loved to help his wife with the chores. They were washing dishes together, and he was drying them. Unlike many men, he really enjoyed sharing the housework.

【2】One day, they started talking about something important. They talked about whether people from different backgrounds should marry each other. The man said he thought it was not a good idea. His wife asked him why, and he explained that he had friends from different backgrounds and they got along well. He didn't want to be called a racist.

【3】His wife asked him again, "But what if two people love each other?" He said that most of those marriages don't last. They argued a bit, and then his wife cut her thumb while washing dishes. He quickly helped her, cleaned the wound, and put a bandage on it.

【4】After the argument, his wife asked him a question that made him think. She asked, "If I were black, would you still marry me?" He thought about it and realized that if she were a different color, she would be a different person. He understood that love is not just about the color of someone's skin, but about who they are inside.

【5】The man felt bad for arguing with his wife. He realized that in the end, love is about understanding and accepting each other, no matter what. He decided to make things right with his wife and told her he would marry her, even if she were a different color. His wife was happy, and they both learned a valuable lesson about love and acceptance.

六年级改写

说,是的

【1】从前，有一个男人非常喜欢帮助他的妻子做家务。他们一起洗盘子，他在擦干盘子。不像许多男人，他真的很喜欢分担家务。

【2】有一天，他们开始谈论一些重要的事情。他们讨论了来自不同背景的人是否应该结婚。那人说他觉得这不是个好主意。他的妻子问他为什么，他解释说他有来自不同背景的朋友，他们相处得很好。他不想被称为种族主义者。

【3】他的妻子又问他:“但如果两个人彼此相爱呢?”他说大多数婚姻都不会长久。他们争论了一会儿，然后他的妻子在洗碗时割伤了拇指。他迅速帮助她，清洗伤口，并在上面缠上绷带。

【4】争吵过后，他妻子问了他一个问题，使他深思。她问:“如果我是黑人，你还会娶我吗?”他想了想，意识到如果她是另一种颜色，她就会是另一个人。他明白，爱不仅仅是一个人的肤色，而是他们的内在。

【5】男人为和妻子争吵而感到内疚。他最终意识到，无论发生什么，爱就是相互理解和接受。他决定和妻子重归于好，并告诉她，即使她是另一种肤色，他也要娶她。他的妻子很高兴，他们都学到了关于爱和接受的宝贵一课。