1.Love and logic(Part Ⅰ)(378)

Sixth grade rewrite

        Love and logic

Part Ⅰ

【1】Once upon a time, there was a young man named Max. He was very smart and logical, even though he was only eighteen years old. Max lived with his roommate, Petey, who was the same age but not as smart. Petey was a bit silly and easily got carried away by new trends.

【2】One day, Max found Petey looking very sad. He thought Petey was sick, but it turned out Petey was just upset because he couldn't afford a raccoon coat. These coats were suddenly popular again, and Petey wanted one badly.

【3】Max didn't understand why Petey wanted a raccoon coat so much. He thought they were dirty, smelly, and heavy. But Petey said it was the cool thing to have, and he wanted to be part of the trend.

【4】Max had an idea. He knew where to get a raccoon coat from his father's old things. In return, he wanted Petey's girlfriend, Polly. Polly was very pretty and well-mannered, but not very smart. Max thought he could help her become smarter.

【5】Max asked Petey if he was really in love with Polly. Petey said he liked her but wasn't sure if it was love. Max then asked if Petey had any special plans with Polly. Petey said no, they were just friends.

【6】Max then asked if there was another boy Polly liked more. Petey said no. Max realized that if Petey wasn't with Polly, he could try to date her himself.

【7】Max went home for the weekend and brought back his father's old raccoon coat. Petey was amazed and wanted it badly. Max told Petey he could have the coat if he gave him Polly.

【8】Petey was shocked at first, but then he thought about it. He wasn't really in love with Polly, and he really wanted the coat. So, after a lot of thinking, Petey agreed to the deal.

【9】In the end, Petey got his raccoon coat, and Max got a chance to date Polly. It was a deal that made both of them happy, at least for the moment.

六年级改写

   爱情与逻辑

第一部分

【1】从前，有一个名叫马克斯的年轻人。尽管他只有18岁，但他很聪明，很有逻辑。马克斯和他的室友皮蒂住在一起，皮蒂和马克斯年龄相仿，但没有他聪明。彼得有点傻，很容易被新潮流冲昏头脑。

【2】一天，马克斯发现彼得看起来很伤心。他以为彼得病了，但原来彼得只是因为买不起浣熊皮大衣而心烦意乱。这些大衣突然又流行起来了，彼得非常想要一件。

【3】马克斯不明白为什么彼得那么想要一件浣熊皮大衣。他觉得它们又脏又臭又重。但彼得说这是很酷的东西，他想成为潮流的一部分。

【4】马克斯有了一个主意。他知道在哪里可以从他父亲的旧东西里找到一件浣熊皮大衣。作为回报，他想要皮特的女朋友波莉。波莉很漂亮，很有礼貌，但不太聪明。马克斯认为他可以帮助她变得更聪明。

【5】马克斯问彼得是否真的爱上了波莉。彼得说他喜欢她，但不确定这是否是爱情。马克斯接着问皮蒂和波莉有没有什么特别的计划。皮特说没有，他们只是朋友。

【6】马克斯接着问波莉是否还有更喜欢的男孩。皮特说不行。麦克斯意识到，如果彼得没有和波莉在一起，他可以试着自己和她约会。

【7】马克斯回家度周末，带回了他父亲的旧浣熊皮大衣。彼得很吃惊，非常想要它。马克斯告诉皮特，如果他把波莉给他，他就可以得到那件外套。

【8】彼得起初很震惊，但后来他又想了想。他并不是真的爱波莉，他真的很想要那件外套。所以，经过一番思考，彼得同意了这笔交易。

【9】最后，彼得得到了他的浣熊皮大衣，马克斯得到了和波莉约会的机会。这是一笔让他们俩都高兴的交易，至少目前是这样。