4.Spring Sowing(491)

Sixth grade rewrite

Spring Sowing

【1】Once upon a time, in a small village in Ireland, there lived a young couple named Martin and Mary Delaney. They had just gotten married the previous autumn and were about to start their first spring planting together as a married couple. It was a chilly February morning, with stars still shining in the sky. The roosters were crowing, and the darkness was slowly being chased away by the light of dawn.

【2】Martin and Mary had a simple breakfast of tea, bread, and butter. They were both dressed in rough, homespun clothes, suitable for working in the fields. They ate quietly, feeling a mix of sleepiness, bad mood, and excitement. This was a special day for them, as they were going to plant seeds in the earth together for the first time.

【3】After breakfast, they went to the barn to get the potato seeds and the tools they needed for planting. Martin accidentally stumbled over a basket in the dark, but Mary quickly comforted him, reminding them not to start their day with anger. They embraced, and all their irritation and tiredness disappeared.

【4】As they walked to their field, they saw no one else around. The sky was beginning to brighten in the east, and birds were singing in the distance. They felt a sense of joy and pride as they reached their little triangular field, which was already prepared with seaweed fertilizer.

【5】Martin, eager to show his strength and skill, took off his shirt and began to dig into the earth with his spade. Mary helped by planting the seeds in rows. They worked hard, turning over the soil and planting the seeds. Martin was determined to prove himself as a good husband and a hard worker.

【6】As the sun rose higher, other villagers also began their work in the fields. The men dug and turned the soil, while the women planted seeds. Martin and Mary took a break for lunch, eating the same simple meal of tea, bread, and butter. They were proud of their work and proud of each other.

【7】By the end of the day, Martin had finished five ridges of planting. He was tired but satisfied with his work. Mary was also tired, but she felt happy to have worked alongside her husband. They knew that this would be their life every spring - working hard in the fields, planting seeds, and hoping for a good harvest.

【8】As they walked home, Martin talked with another farmer about their work, while Mary followed behind, lost in thought. They were both looking forward to the rest that night would bring, and they knew that every spring, they would face the same hard work. But for now, they were content, having worked together and planted the seeds of their future.

六年级改写

春天播种

【1】从前，在爱尔兰的一个小村庄里，住着一对名叫马丁和玛丽·德莱尼的年轻夫妇。他们去年秋天刚结婚，正准备作为已婚夫妇一起开始他们的第一次春季种植。这是二月里一个寒冷的早晨，天上的星星还在闪烁。公鸡在啼叫，黎明的曙光慢慢地把黑暗赶走了。

【2】马丁和玛丽吃了一顿简单的早餐，有茶、面包和黄油。他们俩都穿着朴素的土布衣服，适合在地里干活。他们安静地吃着，感到困倦、坏心情和兴奋。这对他们来说是一个特殊的日子，因为他们将第一次一起在地里播种。

【3】早饭后，他们去谷仓拿土豆种子和种植所需的工具。马丁在黑暗中不小心绊倒了一个篮子，但玛丽很快安慰了他，提醒他们不要生气地开始新的一天。他们拥抱在一起，所有的烦恼和疲惫都消失了。

【4】当他们走向自己的田地时，周围一个人也没有。东方的天空开始变亮，远处的鸟儿在歌唱。当他们到达那块三角形的小田地时，他们感到一种喜悦和自豪，田地里已经堆满了海藻肥。

【5】马丁急于显示他的力量和技巧，他脱下衬衫，开始用铲子挖地。玛丽帮助一排排播种。他们辛勤地工作，翻土播种。马丁决心证明自己是一个好丈夫和一个勤奋的工人。

【6】随着太阳升起，其他村民也开始在地里干活了。男人们挖土翻土，女人们播种。马丁和玛丽休息了一下，吃了同样简单的午餐:茶、面包和黄油。他们为自己的工作感到骄傲，也为彼此感到骄傲。

【7】当天结束时，马丁已经种完了五垄地。他很累，但对工作很满意。玛丽也很累，但她很高兴能和丈夫一起工作。他们知道这将是他们每年春天的生活，在地里辛勤劳作，播种，希望有个好收成。

【8】他们回家时，马丁和另一个农民谈论他们的工作，玛丽跟在后面，陷入了沉思。他们都期待着那天晚上的休息，他们知道，每年春天，他们都会面临同样的艰苦工作。但现在，他们很满足，一起工作，播下了未来的种子。