5.The Nightingale and the Rose(372)

Sixth grade rewrite

The Nightingale and the Rose

【1】Once upon a time, there was a young student who loved a girl very much. He wanted to dance with her at a ball, but she told him she would only dance with him if he brought her a red rose. The student searched his garden but found no red roses. He was very sad because he thought he couldn't dance with the girl he loved.

【2】In the garden, a nightingale heard the student's sadness. The nightingale loved to sing about love and thought it was the most precious thing in the world. She decided to help the student by finding a red rose for him.

【3】The nightingale flew to three different rose trees, but none of them had red roses. The first rose tree had white roses, the second had yellow roses, and the third had red roses, but it was too cold for them to bloom. The nightingale learned that the only way to get a red rose was to sing with her heart against a thorn all night long, and her blood would turn into a red rose.

【4】Despite the danger, the nightingale decided to sing for the red rose. She sang all night, and her blood turned into a beautiful red rose. The rose was so perfect that even the moon stopped to listen.

【5】The next morning, the student found the red rose and was very happy. He took the rose to the girl he loved, but she was not happy. She said the rose didn't match her dress and that she preferred jewels given to her by someone else.

【6】The student was very sad and angry. He threw the rose away and decided that love was not practical. He went back to his room and started reading a big, dusty book about philosophy instead.

【7】The nightingale's sacrifice showed how much she believed in love, even though it was not appreciated by the student or the girl. The story teaches us that love is a powerful and beautiful thing, even if it's not always understood or valued by everyone.

六年级改写

夜莺与玫瑰

【1】从前，有一个年轻的学生，他非常爱一个女孩。他想和她在舞会上跳舞，但她告诉他，只有他送她一朵红玫瑰，她才愿意和他跳舞。这个学生翻遍了他的花园，但没有找到红玫瑰。他很伤心，因为他认为他不能和他爱的女孩跳舞。

【2】花园里，夜莺听到了学生的悲伤。夜莺喜欢歌唱爱情，认为爱情是世界上最珍贵的东西。她决定帮这个学生找一朵红玫瑰送给他。

【3】夜莺飞到三棵不同的玫瑰树上，但没有一棵长着红玫瑰。第一棵玫瑰树上有白玫瑰，第二棵有黄玫瑰，第三棵有红玫瑰，但是天气太冷了，它们没有开花。夜莺明白了得到一朵红玫瑰的唯一方法就是整夜用她的心顶着一根刺歌唱，她的血就会变成一朵红玫瑰。

【4】夜莺不顾危险，决定为红玫瑰歌唱。她唱了一整夜，她的血变成了一朵美丽的红玫瑰。这朵玫瑰是如此完美，以至于月亮都停下来倾听。

【5】第二天早上，学生发现了红玫瑰，非常高兴。他把玫瑰送给他心爱的女孩，但她并不开心。她说玫瑰和她的衣服不相配，她更喜欢别人送给她的珠宝。

【6】这个学生既伤心又生气。他把玫瑰扔掉，认为爱情是不现实的。他回到自己的房间，开始读一本满是灰尘的哲学大书。

【7】夜莺的牺牲表明了她是多么相信爱情，尽管这并没有得到学生和女孩的赞赏。这个故事告诉我们，爱是一种强大而美丽的东西，即使它并不总是被每个人理解或重视。