3.Love and logic(Part Ⅲ)(349)

Sixth grade rewrite

        Love and logic

Part Ⅲ

【1】Max spent a lot of time with Polly, teaching her about different ways of thinking.  He was like a teacher, and Polly was like a student.  After many days of learning, Polly started to understand these thinking tricks, and Max was very happy.  He thought Polly was now clever enough to be his girlfriend.

【2】One day, Max decided to tell Polly that he loved her.  He said, "Polly, I love you.  You are very special to me.  Will you be my girlfriend?"  But Polly didn't say yes right away.  She thought for a moment and then said, "Max, you taught me to think carefully.  I can't just say yes without thinking about it."

【3】Max was surprised.  He thought Polly would be happy to be with him.  But Polly said, "I can't be your girlfriend because I already promised Petey Bellows that I would be his girlfriend."  Petey was another boy, and Polly liked him too.

【4】Max was very upset.  He thought Petey wasn't as smart or as good as he was.  But Polly said, "Petey has a raccoon coat, and I like it."  Max didn't understand why Polly liked Petey just because of a coat, but he realized that love is not always about being smart or having a lot of things.

【5】In the end, Max learned that love is not just about logic and thinking.  It's also about feelings and what makes people happy.  He realized that even though he was smart, he couldn't force Polly to love him.  Love is something that happens naturally, and sometimes it doesn't make sense at all.

【6】So, Max and Polly stayed friends, and Max learned a valuable lesson about love and friendship.  He understood that sometimes, even the smartest people can't control who they fall in love with.  He realized that love is not just about being smart or having a lot of things.  It's about what makes you happy and what feels right.

六年级改写

  爱情与逻辑

第三部分

【1】马克斯花了很多时间和波莉在一起，教她不同的思维方式。他像个老师，波莉像个学生。经过许多天的学习，波莉开始理解这些思维技巧，马克斯非常高兴。他认为波莉现在足够聪明，可以做他的女朋友了。

【2】一天，麦克斯决定告诉波莉他爱她。他说:“波莉，我爱你。你对我来说很特别。你愿意做我的女朋友吗?”但是波莉并没有马上答应。她想了一会儿，然后说:“麦克斯，你教会了我要仔细思考。我不能不加思考就答应。”

【3】马克斯很吃惊。他认为波莉会很高兴和他在一起。但是波莉说:“我不能做你的女朋友，因为我已经答应过皮蒂·贝洛斯我会做他的女朋友。”皮泰是另一个男孩，波莉也喜欢他。

【4】马克斯非常心烦意乱。他觉得皮蒂不如他聪明，不如他优秀。但是波莉说:“皮蒂有一件浣熊皮大衣，我喜欢它。”马克斯不明白波莉为什么只因为一件外套就喜欢皮蒂，但他意识到，爱并不总是聪明或拥有很多东西。

【5】最后，麦克斯明白了爱不仅仅是逻辑和思考。它也是关于感觉和什么能让人快乐。他意识到，即使他很聪明，他也不能强迫波莉爱他。爱情是自然而然发生的事情，有时它完全没有意义。

【6】于是，马克斯和波莉成为了朋友，马克斯学到了关于爱情和友谊的宝贵一课。他明白，有时候，即使是最聪明的人也无法控制自己爱上的人。他意识到爱不仅仅是聪明或拥有很多东西。重要的是什么让你快乐，什么让你感觉正确。