4.Spring Sowing(611)

Ninth grade rewrite

Spring Sowing

【1】In a quaint Irish village nestled among rolling hills and lush greenery, Martin Delaney and his wife Mary began their day before the sun had even peeked over the horizon. Martin, a young man with brown hair and eyes, and Mary, a girl with red cheeks and blue eyes, had recently tied the knot in the previous autumn.

【2】They were dressed in simple, homespun clothes, ready to work in the fields. They ate their breakfast of tea, bread, and butter in silence, feeling both sleepy and excited. This was their first spring sowing as a married couple, and they were eager to start their new life together.

【3】After breakfast, they went to the barn to get their tools. Martin accidentally stumbled over a basket in the dark, but Mary quickly comforted him, reminding them not to start their day with anger. They embraced, and all their irritation and sleepiness disappeared.

【4】As they walked to their field, they saw no one else around. The sky was beginning to brighten in the east, and birds were singing in the distance. They felt a sense of joy and pride as they reached their little triangular field, which was already prepared with seaweed fertilizer.

【5】Martin, eager to show his strength and skill, took off his shirt and began to dig into the earth with his spade. Mary helped by planting the seeds in rows. They worked hard, turning over the soil and planting the seeds. Martin was determined to prove himself as a good husband and a hard worker.

【6】As the sun rose higher, other villagers also began their work in the fields. The men dug and turned the soil, while the women planted seeds. Martin and Mary took a break for lunch, eating the same simple meal of tea, bread, and butter. They were proud of their work and proud of each other.

【7】By the end of the day, Martin had finished five ridges of planting. He was tired but satisfied with his work. Mary was also tired, but she felt happy to have worked alongside her husband. They knew that this would be their life every spring - working hard in the fields, planting seeds, and hoping for a good harvest.

【8】As they walked home, Martin talked with another farmer about their work, while Mary followed behind, lost in thought. They were both looking forward to the rest that night would bring, and they knew that every spring, they would face the same hard work. But for now, they were content, having worked together and planted the seeds of their future.

【9】As Martin and Mary Delaney returned home from their day of hard work in the fields, they carried with them not just the physical exhaustion but also a profound sense of accomplishment and unity. Their first spring sowing as a married couple had been a test of their strength and commitment, and they had faced it together, side by side.

【10】The seeds they planted were not just the beginning of a new crop; they were the seeds of their shared future, a future built on the foundation of hard work, mutual respect, and enduring love. The day's labor had been grueling, but it had also been a celebration of their partnership and a reaffirmation of their dedication to each other and to the land that sustained them. As night fell, they found solace in the knowledge that, come what may, they would face it together, as one.

九年级改写

春天播种

【1】在爱尔兰一个古雅的村庄里，马丁·德莱尼和他的妻子玛丽在太阳还没有从地平线上露出来的时候就开始了他们的一天。马丁是一个棕色头发和眼睛的年轻人，玛丽是一个红脸颊蓝眼睛的女孩，他们在去年秋天刚刚结婚。

【2】他们穿着朴素的土布衣服，准备下地干活。他们默默地吃着早餐，有茶、面包和黄油，既困又兴奋。这是他们结婚后的第一次春播，他们渴望一起开始新的生活。

【3】早饭后，他们去谷仓拿工具。马丁在黑暗中不小心绊倒了一个篮子，但玛丽很快安慰了他，提醒他们不要生气地开始新的一天。他们拥抱在一起，所有的烦躁和困倦都消失了。

【4】当他们走向自己的田地时，周围一个人也没有。东方的天空开始变亮，远处的鸟儿在歌唱。当他们到达那块三角形的小田地时，他们感到一种喜悦和自豪，田地里已经堆满了海藻肥。

【5】马丁急于显示他的力量和技巧，他脱下衬衫，开始用铲子挖地。玛丽帮助一排排播种。他们辛勤地工作，翻土播种。马丁决心证明自己是一个好丈夫和一个勤奋的工人。

【6】随着太阳升起，其他村民也开始在地里干活了。男人们挖土翻土，女人们播种。马丁和玛丽休息了一下，吃了同样简单的午餐:茶、面包和黄油。他们为自己的工作感到骄傲，也为彼此感到骄傲。

【7】当天结束时，马丁已经种完了五垄地。他很累，但对工作很满意。玛丽也很累，但她很高兴能和丈夫一起工作。他们知道这将是他们每年春天的生活，在地里辛勤劳作，播种，希望有个好收成。

【8】他们回家时，马丁和另一个农民谈论他们的工作，玛丽跟在后面，陷入了沉思。他们都期待着那天晚上的休息，他们知道，每年春天，他们都会面临同样的艰苦工作。但现在，他们很满足，一起工作，播下了未来的种子。

【9】当马丁和玛丽·德莱尼夫妇结束一天的辛勤劳作回到家时，他们不仅感到了体力上的疲惫，还感到了一种深刻的成就感和团结感。他们结婚后的第一次春播是对他们力量和承诺的考验，他们并肩面对。

【10】他们种下的种子不仅仅是新作物的开始;他们是他们共同未来的种子，一个建立在努力工作、相互尊重和持久爱的基础上的未来。这一天的劳动非常辛苦，但这也是对他们的伙伴关系的庆祝，也是对他们对彼此和对这片养育他们的土地的奉献的重申。夜幕降临时，他们想到，无论发生什么，他们都要团结一致，共同面对。